Mooooooorree Crit.

Today was another day of confessions.  Although I thought there were a couple good ones, overall I have to admit it wasn't my favorite day of projects.  The project I found most impact full of the day was probably Steffi's.  I really liked the presentation of her project and thought it was pretty well thought out.  I loved the mess of the situation, being representative of the mess of her situation that she had to shuffle through herself.  Just like we had to figure out what was being said in spanish, and gibberish, on her letters, Steffi had to figure out what to do in her situation. So good job with that one.  I also found it most touching out of the one's presented today.  I really commend her on her situation and could have never done that myself.  The one I found most week was actually Ashley's.  First of all, I wasn't able to guess that she was talking to God in her letter.  It seemed as if it was to her father in my eyes, which for some reason I felt more compassion for when I thought it was her father.. I didn't really understand what the whole confession was about.  I mean I know she hasn't talked to God in a while but I feel as though maybe she left something meaningful out of the letter that would have better roped me into her situation.  I just kind of felt like something was off or missing. But I do appreciate her willingness to present something that was clearly emotional damaging for her, I just wish she would have better communicated to the audience through her letter.